CORRECCION GENERAL
• El book debe contener todo el proceso de investigación.
• El orden de los items a desarrollar en el book debe tener una relación directa con el orden que hemos seguido en el proceso de investigación, es decir:
analogía piel urbana y piel humana > definición del elemento asignado (¿qué es?, ¿cómo es?, ¿quién lo hace?, etc) > tipologías (definir cada una de ellas y ejemplificar) > observaciones relevantes rescatadas a lo largo del estudio > desarrollo de conceptos (definir y graficar dentro de un universo conceptual todos aquellos términos rescatados a partir de la observación, la definición corresponde a la visión que se han logrado construir a lo largo de la investigación) > propuesta conceptual
• Pongan atención en la redacción y faltas de ortografías. Estos detalles los podemos ir corrigiendo en forma paralela al desarrollo formal de los contenedores.
• La propuesta conceptual debe estar incluida en el book. Recuerden que esto corresponde a una declaración en términos conceptuales de lo que ustedes harán, en forma de frase u oración.
CORRECCION GRUPAL
1. Sticker > Camila Elorza / Camila Vidueira
• Falta hacer una reseña o introducción sobre el movimiento del street art en relación al sticker en términos generales. ¿Qué es? ¿Cómo es en relación a los otros movimientos? ¿Quién los hace?, etc.
• Nos parece que el book está bien desarollado en términos de oficio.
• Existe un desarrollo gráfico al comienzo, sería interesante que traten de integrar más esa gráfica al resto del book y que no quede sólo al inicio, cuidando siempre que no moleste a la lectura de la información y no caer en el exceso.
• La propuesta conceptual debe estar incluida en el book, así como también la definición de conceptos.
NOTA: 4,6
2. Afiche > Camila Jara / Praxila Larenas
• En la analogía falta ejemplificar en términos gráficos lo que hablan.
• El desarrollo gráfico del book nos parece pobre en relación a la gráfica que hay detrás de los afiches. Falta apropiarse de este mundo gráfico y llevarlo al book.
• Los contenidos del book se anuncian pero falta desarrollarlos y profundizar en ellos.
• Deben definir las tipologías, explicar en que consiten y si van a mostrar afiches a modo de ejemplo podrían ser más generosas.
• Las tipologías corresponden a categorías, los que definen como protesta social son muy similares con los que definen como políticos, lo mismo pasa con la categoría fiestas y publicitarios. Las categorías son grupos amplios que nos permiten encasillar los distintos tipos de afiches que hay, y por lo mismo deben ser diferentes unas de otras.
• Deben incluir la propuesta conceptual.
NOTA: 4,2
3. Graffiti > Claudia Valenzuela / María José Baranda
• Falta profundizar los contenidos.
• Las observaciones realizadas a lo largo de la investigación también deben estar incluidas en el book.
• Deben establecer cuales son las tipologías y luego definir cada una de ellas.
• Pongan atención con el orden de los temas en el book, la analogía no debería ir al final.
• Existe un desarrollo y definición de conceptos pero faltó declarar la propuesta conceptual.
• El oficio es una parte importante dentro de la entrega final, por lo que deben cuidar más este aspecto.
NOTA: 5,0
4. Stencil > Nallarette Arizmendi / Isidora Urrejola
• Existe una intención gráfica en la analogía, sería interesante que la siguieran desarrollando a lo largo del book.
• Faltan contenidos como: definición del stencil (¿qué es?, ¿quién lo hace?, ¿qué lo hace particular?), observaciones y definición de conceptos.
• Las tipologías que establecen corresponden más a los distintos temas que encontramos en los stencil, sin embargo las categorías corresponden a grupos que en términos conceptuales pueden abarcar uno o varios temas de stencil. Por ejemplo ustedes definen una tipología internacional, una política y una social, sin embargo la definición que dan es muy similar en cada uno de ellos... ¿no sería posible abarcar todos estos dentro de una tipología llamada PROTESTA y luego entrar a definir esa tipología y sus distintas subcategorías?
NOTA: 4,2
7.11.07
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Much like cholesterol, where there is good and bad cholesterol, debt
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way for a good purpose. In fact many people become wealthy by
borrowing money to invest in business opportunities. They call it
using other peoples' money. But my focus here is on how individuals
spend their money on themselves. It's how you spend your money.
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a good thing. If you take out a $2,000 loan and you learn a skill that
let's you earn an extra $5,000 a year, you'd be crazy not to take the
loan. If you take out a student loan because you don't know what you
want to do with your life and you don't want to get a job, well,
that's not a good idea.
For most people taking out a mortgage is the only way they'll be able
to purchase a home. This could be considered good debt. Because of the
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heavily weighted towards paying interest and mere pittance going
towards principle, it's a good idea to pay off even this good debt as
soon as possible. Many wise financial minds teach that before
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payments it's better to invest in income producing assets first,
something like rental property.
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debt, then take it on. If you break your leg it's a good idea to take
on the debt of a doctor's bill rather then waiting until you have the
money to get the bone set. Personal vs. Business Debt
There can be some big differences between personal and business debt.
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considered one entity.
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owner, in this case the share-holders. This is true even if only one
person owns all the shares. Legally the corporation is considered a
separate entity and if the business has debt problems it doesn't
translate to shareholder debt problems. That's why entrepreneurs like
having their businesses in a separate legal entity.
It's also why if you are considering going into business as a way to
make more money to get out of debt it's a good idea to have the proper
business structure. Is There Another Way?
Even with good debt you want to think twice before taking it on.
Taking a student loan to improve your employment situation is a great
idea, good debt. But wait, before you take on debt ask "Is there a
better way?" There are many sources of grants, and yes a grant is
money that you don't have to pay back. So before you take the easy way
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interest or calling yourself at dinner demanding payment.
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that you've investigated other ways of taking care of it before you
sign your way into debt. And if you do take it on don't allow yourself
to feel burdened by it. You did what you had to and you'll pay it off
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